
Chesterton, j’ai affaire avec vous. Pas ici. À suivre.
No matter where life takes me,
I carry this love. I carry my part.
This ending to Aaiún Nin’s long-ish discursive poem “McDonald’s Money” made me cry. Not from sadness, but because it crowns a fine writing with the keen point that love is a shared burden we take up and carry with devotion; also because I know more of it now than when I was younger and stupider.
It’s the third of three poems by Nin in Poetry, July-August 2026. All three teach me something about the craft and art of it: Equally relevant to how something is said is the selectivity deployed in what is said. That may sound ridiculously truistic, but for me it captures something of the purity I respond to in Nin’s deceptively unguarded plainspokenness and declarative finesse. Consider the phrase, [You] Hold me back to life. Of course poets choose their content and words! The trick is to choose well.
One of Nin’s three poems is so short that I venture to quote it entirely here:
In the Camp
In the camp they cannot pronounce my name
So they have given me a new one
I have lost everything
Ask me my name
Please ask me my name
(Aaiún Nin)
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Confession
An early attempt of mine to reflect distress in the face of a young Yazidi refugee in Syria’s civil war under Assad. Unskilled though it is, it showed me the fine line that can exist between mirth and anguish in the human visage.
I confess to a proclivity (morbid?) for depicting faces in various states of contortion. A face at rest, unless it’s grizzled or reflective of a corrupt soul, has bland contours. States of agitation are what lay bare the deserts, mountains and swamps of the human physiognomy.
I cruise journalism and clip photos (jpegs) of mass rallies.
Often they’re filled with the faces of men who exhibit rage in their demeanors. All my life, Iran has chanted, Death to America, the great Satan!
Persian uses the Arabic alphabet. I’ve studied only Arabic.
Trump’s useless rejoinder referencing Iran has been, They’re scum.
From image of reporting on a demonstration against removing Confederate statuary. It illustrates contempt.
The two extremes, Satan and scum, do violence to the lived reality, complexity and vitality of two worthy populations duped into senseless contention by bad leaders. Most citizens of both countries deserve a better life than they’ve got.
As I zoom the photos and study the men’s expressions, I often imagine sitting with one in his living room, taking tea and conversing. Maybe arguing, maybe disagreeing, but not with violence. Parting with a handshake, or, better, a fraternal embrace.
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